Add a word to make a story

[Grogshla]

One day, a young herper seen a very obese smelly clown herping with a monkey. This monkey picked up three banana's and a morelia bredli which had eaten cake made with fecal from macaw. "Yummy"! Then

 

[snakes123]

One day, a young herper seen a very obese smelly clown herping with a monkey. This monkey picked up three banana's and a morelia bredli which had eaten cake made with fecal from macaw. "Yummy"! said

 

[mumofsnakelover]

One day a young herper seen a very obese clown herping with a monkey the monkey was

 

[kawasakirider]

Not having a dig, but please try to make it make sense. If something has "" around it, it's indicative that someone said something, putting "then" after it makes no sense.

One day, a young herper seen a very obese smelly clown herping with a monkey. This monkey picked up three banana's and a morelia bredli which had eaten cake made with fecal from macaw. "Yummy"! Then BANG!! went

 

[mumofsnakelover]

Sorry guys thread only just showed

 

[snakes123]

Not having a dig, but please try to make it make sense. If something has "" around it, it's indicative that someone said something, putting "then" after it makes no sense.

One day, a young herper seen a very obese smelly clown herping with a monkey. This monkey picked up three banana's and a morelia bredli which had eaten cake made with fecal from macaw. "Yummy"! Then BANG!! went

What me to change it?

 

[kawasakirider]

No dramas, add something to it

What me to change it?

Nah mate. It wasn't you that lost it. I was hoping someone would add some dialogue, with "said" or something like that and it could have been continued. Doesn't matter.

 

[snakes123]

Nahh ill change it so it can keep going. Ok its changed: One day, a young herper seen a very obese smelly clown herping with a monkey. This monkey picked up three banana's and a morelia bredli which had eaten cake made with fecal from macaw. "Yummy"! said.

 

[kawasakirider]

New rule (will help us make something with sense) add 3 words

One day, a young herper seen a very obese smelly clown herping with a monkey. This monkey picked up three banana's and a morelia bredli which had eaten cake made with fecal from macaw. "Yummy"! said the handsome bredli

 

[Jdsixtyone]

The

 

[SamNabz]

The

One day, a young herper seen a very obese smelly clown herping with a monkey. This monkey picked up three banana's and a morelia bredli which had eaten cake made with fecal from macaw. "Yummy"! said the handsome bredli the end.

 

[Jdsixtyone]

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[kawasakirider]

Why post in the thread if you're going to ruin it?

Snake madness - Austrian bikes are crap

 

[Jdsixtyone]

Kawi's are the crappest of them all....

Why post in the thread if you're going to ruin it?

Snake madness - Austrian bikes are crap

 

[SamNabz]

Was just giving the amazing story a good ending?

 

[kawasakirider]

Kaw's are the crappest of them all....

Really? That's why James Stewart won for years on them? Tell me who's been on the top of the podium consecutively on a KTM in the US? Bet you can't even clear a 40ft table top.